That's a cool poem. That's weird that happens to you. What do you think about when you feel like running out of the room??? Well, take care,

- Chris

Sorry about school and not getting to see fairguy. Sucks about the ticket.

Good job on making it to your goal of 115!!! Well, take care,

- Chris

I'm glad you're so determined to boost your GPA. Determination is all you really need IMO.

YAY! A new kitty! That's cool. Looking forward to the pics! Tallica is a cut name.

TTYL,

- Chris

Wow, that's so cool you got a $25 gift certificate for that.

9/77 is REALLY good! Good luck with school! Take care,

- Chris

Lol thanks for the comment, but i need to learn to take off the necklace since i really like it

Nice pictures, and now train is fun hahaha

Love,
Dee.

This was confusing... I can't figure out if it's cause I'm half asleep or not... I really like this entry though. Very uh, thought provoking.... oh, nice pics. You're pretty. Take care,

- Chris

I like that line. I don't know what to believe....

I like the tatoo. It's SO pretty! TTYL,

- Chris

Awh, that's okay.
I enjoyed reading them while they were still up.
My entries are hardly ever creative.
But I know what you mean, I joined mdd so people could read my thoughts.
I've learned from mdd that sometimes the only people you can trust are the ones you don't know.
I love that, which makes me love mdd.

=]

Ohhhhhh....... But think, you might want to know what you did on a certain day, say 5 years from now and you go back to look and it's gone! IDK, my entries are RARELY creative... but I think about it like that. I like to see how far I've come with my struggles, you know? Of course it's your choice and I know you had your reasons. Well, take care. TTYL,

- Chris

Yay, I'm 1st to comment! Hehe, I love it when that happens.... I know , I'm a dork.

I need your blood pressure and temperature and I need to get a sample of your blood so I can run some tests. Oh, and can you youknowwhat in this cup for me?

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Ah, I see.....

NOTHING. I see nothing. WTF happened to you? Weird. At first I would've said WEED cause sometimes when I used to smoke I'd get so dizzy I felt like I was seriously going to faint. But you were sick to your stomache too. IDK. I hope you feel better though so you can go to riverfest (BTW, what's that?). Like you said, maybe it was a combination. Then again, I've gotten sick for NO REASON pleanty of times before.....

Hey, I LOVE the zoo. I love animals! I'm such a little kid at heart! PLEASE take pictures and post um, k?

You only weigh 112? Damn. I'm 5'2/5'3 and about 125. I used to weigh 153 a couple years ago..... How tall are you?

BTW, catchy title. Kinda poetic....

Well, take care. TTYL,

- Chris

[MsChrispy]

hi :D yea i write loads of poems, just about anything that makes me feel strongly about soemthing, mostly about people and the way they affect me, just kind of thigns you cant explain through normal words :) i've always like wanted somewhere to write them so im gonna find some and you can have a read :) but none of them are as good as this...its so deep, im fascinated :)

xxxx

Love the poem.

3 days?! Damn. I hope you get some sleep soon. Have you tried anything to help?

Wow, a car. Sounds like a sweet gift!

45?  That's CREEPY...

Have a good one. Take care,

- Chris

 You're amazing. I really loved the second one. You've inspired me to write a poem now, though I doubt it'll come out like yours!

Thanks for the note! Take care,

- Chris

I feel your pain about the scars! I have scars all over my left arm and I have to wear long sleeve shirts ALL the time. Grr....
Your note made me laugh!

-Chris

it's amazing even if you can't understand it!
there's so much said there;.. i love it

it goes with me right now. cept the kissing doesn't haha.

=love 2 you. -me.

hey; you got a gift for words too;
these are written very well.

you are bursting with talent =]

-jess

Love the poem! Who's the "she" your talking about?

RYN: No that wasn't lame. I like the metaphor about the door. It makes sense. Thank you for the note and trying even though you didn't know what to say really.

Have fun at the dance!

Take care.

Wonderful mam!
You are a very talented writer; don't be afraid to pursue anything in that field!
-me.

Wow, I really like this!

RYN: Just some collages on tiles... not very interesting, but in the end it looks pretty cool.

Thank you!

Yeah, I think everyone complains to a certain degree. Life certainly gives us things to complain about.....

- Chris

I like your poem. I'm sorry you have to feel this way.

- Chris

I like the poem. =]

I've done that before... spent the night at a different friend's house than the one I said I was at.
But it was so I could go to a party, lol.
Guitar hero 3 = love.
South Park = love.

Glad you had fun.

I hate when parents don't give you the trust you deserve, espically when you work for it.
It sounds like you had a good time;

happy 2008. =]

As long as you feel it was worth it.... At least you had a good time.  Take care,

- Chris

You're a tallented writer.... that's deep.

RYN: I'm flattered! LOL.... , but seriously, thanks. That's weird you said that cause I do the same thing with some favs and you're definitely (sp?) one of them!

- Chris

I used to be afraid of sinning and going to hell.
But now I'm not. I see it like this, If I go to hell,
well I earned my way in there. Once you find
that person for you, you'll be able to explore
them and you'll understand them; and they'll
understand you. It might take a long time, but
it will definately be worth it.

I've missed reading your writing, i love it.
Im doing pretty good, pierced my lip :)
How've you been?
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[PerpetuallySearching]

An ending would be cool, but it sounds really good how it is.  Take care.

Thank you very much for the extremely nice comment  Much appreciated!! I look forward to reading more of your work

I think it's good. I'm really surprised that it means nothing to you, considering it's so deep. I think you should have put in a poem that actually means something to you. I think you would've been happier with it. But that's just me.

So how are you?

Very emotional poem (especially considering you have no emotional attachment to it). It gives alot of visuals...I like it

I hated the PSAT. It wasn't so bad this year. I had to take it last year and this year. Our principal agreed to pay for it. I didn't like the math part, but I suck at math.

Yeah, I hate that. My head's telling me to get over him and my heart doesn't want to. I don't know what to do.

Awww. Haha. Congrats on getting married! ^^

Man, if I got married at 16 my mom would kill Dx

Best of luck to you both! ^^!!

-Bethany

My boa's name is... Well, it depends on the day. I re-name it all the time.

Mm, not fair. You're  a fantastic writer. No, that's not fair. I'm jealous. :]

I try, but I'm not very good. Which is a bad thing 'cause I plan on being a songwriter/singer.

Bahaha.

Love, Nikki Nightmare </3

Other than the two I commented I like these a lot. You might need to edit a few things. Not for every one but a few to make them school appropriate. I hate how we have to edit stuff all the time.

Sing My Story

The Demon Inside of Me

Go Ahead

You Intention

The Controller of Life

Bleed You Mermaid

My God Awful Disease

Interesting..... IDK what to say really. Not really sure what it's about, but it's very good.

Who are you talking about? Just wondering......

Have a good one.

- Chris

 Dear Friend,

    You have so much talent...I say that as someone who use to be a published greeting card writer...I have a clue to what talent is!  YOU have a Gift! 

   Thank YOU so much for your kind note..Hearing from you made me smile!

   I'm looking forward to your next entry!

    Have a Blessed day!,

         Jewel

you're very pretty. i like your top. i know, people at hottopic are always so nice.

I like the pictures too, they're fun. I'm trying to pull myself up, but it's not easy. & i'm slipping a lot currently but i'm trying to keep it from happening so much. It's not too bad right now, I haven't thought of suicide or anything, i just tend to cry a lot. thanks for the support!

Wonderful.

Your praise means a lot--especially now that I see you also have a knack for words. Excellent. I hope I can read more of your writing and that you'll continue to check out mine...

"thank you
good-bye
mr. suicide"

Is a fantastic conclusion--and the enjambment (pasuses between liens), were well placed. All-in-all, this was a great piece. It showed a lot of direction and a smooth rhythm.

-Eden-

Lol.
I know,
I love it too.
Amazing poem. <3

it was sarcasm.

Damn. You're very talented. That was so amazing!

I love to write too. I learn from you.

RYC: Sorry you have them too. I guess you know how much it sucks then huh? You said, "i hate them but sometimes love them too cuz i always seem so much calmer once it finally passes" You're lucky cause I know I'm not calmer once it passes. Often, I'm thinking about and dreading the next one. Do you have them often? Just curious.

Take care,

- Chris

[MsChrispy]

thanks....i hope your hapiness  pulls through this all to!!

Ilul

I really like the poem. It's deep. 

A little triggering though. Oh, well. It's good.

Flows really nicely. Me likey.

Take care.

- Chris

wow that was amazing

love ya

kate

[underwoodlover]

The top is hot as, and the boots too.. I want some! Lol. And although you can't see much of it, your hair looks alright.

Awesome entry. Xx.

glad you enjoyed yourself!  and i agree about the hot topic people, they are AMAZINGly nice!  :]
and i think your oberly gorgeous.

and adding ya on myspace [u sent me ur link on a comment]

*mak*

heyhey

thnx for the comment honey,

means a lot

i love the tank top!
its so hott

Xx LoveLove

I love the poem..... or maybe I should say like.....

=]

lol. thnks for the comment cutie pie<3

yaa the whole "colors do matter" thing is gonna take it's toll in the end. CAN'T WAIT.

& hey-i need some help developing Lucy's character.  I actually made lists for both of them:

Hunter

·          Writer-very deep thoughts.

·          Green eyes/brown longish hair

·          Rich family-2 brothers

·          Plays guitar/writes songs

·          Loves English

·          Favorite of Mrs. Macvittie

·          Hates math

·          Soccer-team captain

·          Listens to Rock & Country

·          photography

Lucy

·          Writer-very deep thoughts

·          Light blue eyes/long jet black hair

·          Very poor family-only child, no father, mother works three jobs: waitress, hairdresser, actress

·          Private schooling

·          Good at math and science

·          Works part-time at the public library

·          Loves dog-

·          Shy

·          Doesn’t trust boys

·          Can’t express feelings

<3

Thanks for the nice comment. I'm doing a lot better with my self harm. I haven't hurt myself in over two or three months. IDK. But I have the urge often. I had a horrible urge today. I read some of your poems too. I really like them! I especially liked the one Sing My Story[[Poem.]]. I'm sorry you're not doing well with the self harm. I can defenitely relate.

BTW, I added you to my favorites.

Take care.

- Chris

This is very good!

CYA

Larissa

Well I guess you could say that the disciples were sort of Jesus' students, he wanted them to go on teaching after he'd left. And I don't mean to sound like a religious nut when I say that :D

Just saying!
-Meggie T.

The first church that I went to was like that because my family was poor, they were real jerks judging me just because of the amount of money my family had. :)

Just saying!
-Meggie T.

That's very depressing. Maybe you should visit a church or something....

Just saying!
-Meggie T.

ilovethis<3

hi how are you, thanks for the comment, you think its good?!?!

well im 15 and my brother is 17.....

what age are you?

catch' ya later

Larissa

[mcflygirl101]

not bad. i kinda like it!

[muchlove.-me]

you're added of course lovely!
not cheesy, cute poem. :]
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